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  1. noona96n Wed 21 Apr 2021 02:12PM UTC

    hi!!! so, first, i wanna apologize if im offending u with my comment
    so, onto the comment
    i don't read 1st person bcs the pronoun 'I' is really personal to me and im... a very immersive person when I read. like, i 'see' the things i read si i generally avoid 1st person stories bcs 1st person stories make me the character (which is what 1st person narrative supposed to do right?)
    but i read this fic anyways bcs bottom!GSD and because it's u writing it. (i adore ur revenge sex fic btw, the angst was just... *chef's kiss*)
    and i saw myself instead of Shi De while this (which... asfghjkldi) and i love every second of it
    im saying i wanna be railed by Shu Yi hut only if im Shi De ahahah i don't think im making sense!
    also, that teeny tiny bit of cock warning 👀👌 i love to see it, please give us more of it, fill up the DeYi cock warming tag, i can't do all the work 😂

    anyway, i love love loveeeee this fic!
    that's it, that's the comment, sorry if it made no sense!😭🥺

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    1. yixuan Thu 22 Apr 2021 06:17AM UTC

      Hey dear, why would I be offended??? Thank you so much for the comment and the appreciation 😘. I can totally see your point, first person does feel a lot more immersive (even though for me it feels more like a good friend directly telling me the story rather than me experiencing it myself... if that makes sense? lol). I've never ever written in first person before and I don't really know what made me do it for this story. Probably because Gao Shide seemed a bit aloof and mysterious for the first half of the season and we never quite knew what his motives were. So I wanted to get a little closer to him and his narrative, I guess.

      Anyway, I'm happy you overcame your aversion and still read the story, thank you so much 💗. I'm so glad you liked it (and also the other one😄). I wasn't even aware of the cock warming until you said it, but I'm glad to help haha. Thank you also for adding all the WBL smut, I'm sure we all need it 😁😁. Anyways, thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment, it really means a lot!! 💗💗

      Last Edited Thu 22 Apr 2021 06:19AM UTC

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