No i know about the prologue length
Its just that from the get go, from when she's 8 in her previous life to when she's 12 in the current, she acts like a teenager
In the canon, the zabuza fight happens before they get to tazuna's home, hence why i said you forewent the fight
The issue of sylvie's chakra happens in the next chapter where she uses two seals on both naruto and sasuke at the start but doesn't get tired
Its why i said you're laying her lack of chakra a bit thick
All that aside, its amazing that you're researching the Japanese calendar to come up with new ideas :)
I did a double check for what you mentioned, but I think I did fix those bits already- in the main series, they encounter Zabuza and Haku shortly after getting to Land of Waves, then more travel to the Bridge, then the rest of the Arc, I am pretty sure it's the proper order right now! Maybe the title or descriptions in story weren't clear enough?
The second time you did the zabuza fight it, everything is fine
This is me reading the first one(the dupe chapter) then reading this, thinking they went back to konoha, then to wave just to fight XD
If you delete the first one, its all fine
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