Comment on Naruto: I Died, And Replaced Sakura?!

  1. ditzykunoichi on Chapter 19 Mon 01 Dec 2025 11:23PM UTC

    Genin

    The prologue is supposed to be a 4 year time skip if that wasn't clear enough! She goes in at 8 but spends 4 years adapting to the world/learning basic stuff. The first side-chapter holiday specials I'm doing are going to focus on the time before the story starts, and then once we get past the Chuunin exams/Konoha crush there is my rewritten versions of the filler and Naruto movies to tie them in better to the story, and I use those to show examples of the holidays in other countries (I came up with a calender based on Japan's and adapted it to what we know about Naruto's world).

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    1. Artoria99 on Chapter 19 Tue 02 Dec 2025 04:58AM UTC

      No i know about the prologue length
      Its just that from the get go, from when she's 8 in her previous life to when she's 12 in the current, she acts like a teenager
      In the canon, the zabuza fight happens before they get to tazuna's home, hence why i said you forewent the fight
      The issue of sylvie's chakra happens in the next chapter where she uses two seals on both naruto and sasuke at the start but doesn't get tired
      Its why i said you're laying her lack of chakra a bit thick

      All that aside, its amazing that you're researching the Japanese calendar to come up with new ideas :)

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      1. ditzykunoichi on Chapter 19 Tue 02 Dec 2025 08:01AM UTC

        Genin

        I did a double check for what you mentioned, but I think I did fix those bits already- in the main series, they encounter Zabuza and Haku shortly after getting to Land of Waves, then more travel to the Bridge, then the rest of the Arc, I am pretty sure it's the proper order right now! Maybe the title or descriptions in story weren't clear enough?

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        1. Artoria99 on Chapter 19 Tue 02 Dec 2025 11:00AM UTC

          The second time you did the zabuza fight it, everything is fine
          This is me reading the first one(the dupe chapter) then reading this, thinking they went back to konoha, then to wave just to fight XD
          If you delete the first one, its all fine

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