Hey sweets! This fic is very good (no matter what you say, silly), just a few errors here and there that can be swiftly corrected with a quick revision. Other than that, the characterization is great and I do get what you mean when you say you want to add more to this. I'd love to see a fully fleshed out story develop from this lovely fic. More backstory, more details, some plot - I'd love to read it whenever!
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dragonmajesty on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Apr 2014 12:31AM UTC
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