This is amazing! I love how you've described everything - you've really captured the ever-roiling emotions that JC has to hide away and shove down in order to function out in front of the rest of the world. And how family - support from someone who cares - can help make functioning that much easier. The hands shaking is a perfect detail - because he does it a lot, even when he's using Zidian - and it's actually a normal reaction to have your hands shake when you're feeling angry or nervous or otherwise overwhelmed with emotion. It's such a shame that he's been made to feel it's a weakness.
AAAA thank you so much<3333 i'm so glad you enjoyed it<333
i know i was like :eyes: hands shaking? how can i make this EXTREMELY sad because i KNOW yu ziyuan would have nitpicked this to death and made him feel like shit over it. what is jiang cheng if not just filled with love for his family [slaps jiang cheng] this bad boy can fit so much love inside him.
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