WAAAAAAAAAA DUDE IM AM GOING TO CRY THAT WAS SO. the grapetrospection...the water of lotus pier imagery...the bitter poison stale tea metaphor...the hands...yeah.....YEAH... god these LINES dude 'Jiang Cheng, always a step behind, always too late to reach out' 'Jiang Cheng can read the water and there is no warmth to be found in those depths' 'scared to death of his mother not for the first time, and scared to death for his brother not for the last time' god i- this is IT dude this is the only fic actually this is it. what the fuck.
THE GRAPETROSPECTION....... god legitcherhally i think i fried half of my brain writing this but only bc i got sad after every other sentence bc of the jiang cheng of it all asoifjdsao i would be like. whoa. okay. two sentences. that is ENOUGH emotional devastation for me for the day<3 oijODIJSADFA
WAAAAAA BABE SERIOUSLY IM LIKE. YOUR THOUGHTS ON THIS FIC AND THE CHARCATERIZATION AND ALL THAT. THE ONLY HTING THAT MATTERS IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT HAPPY BIRTHDAY<3333
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