I really like your grasp of the characters and that Lupe's Sergio preference was dealt with. Her homophobia subsided quickly in the show but she was such a big reason for their separation. I really wanted her to feel a little bit of guilt over it tbh. Sergio in this was a much better friend than in the show. I hope you continue to write!
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Repbeyondthedefaults Wed 15 Apr 2020 06:48PM UTC
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