AHHHHHHHHHH, I KIND OF JUST LOVE THIS CONCEPT ALREADY SDLKFJSDFPSDF. I think you did a good job of incorporating the actually age differences in here, so that Sherlock is actually seventeen and John has become a healer (AHHH, I want a Healer Watson <3) The aftermath of the final battle at Hogwarts is written well, with despair and the image of snow. I could really see it in my mind. Now I'm excited to see how John and Sherlock meet, if they've met before or if this is the first time they've seen each other. I wonder how the events of the HP books have influenced both their lives. Great intro (hugs)
I'm so glad you liked it. Everything that happened had a severe impact on both of them, but in completely different ways. I hope I'll surprise you.
I'm finishing the next chapter now. I don't know if what I have in mind is what you have, but I guess I'll know real soon right ? :p As I said, this is the first part of a series, it acts like a introduction. The real thing comes after this, and so will the idea that created all of this. Let's just hope reading so much Lomonaaeren improved my making-up-magic-things ability! xx
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