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  1. Lasadh Fri 26 Oct 2012 05:59PM UTC

    I could barely look away from this!

    BEAUTIFUL use of flashback. It kept the suspense humming all the way through.

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    1. Etharei Mon 29 Oct 2012 12:14PM UTC

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      Thank you very much! I was worried that readers might not like the back-and-forth of the narrative, so it's great to hear that you enjoyed it :D

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