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  1. Hell I know it can be frustrating or confusing not to get any comments, starting to wonder if anyone even likes it, but rest assured at least I deeply enjoy your ff.
    That being said;
    Two things, no need to answer
    How in the world did you manage to upload all these in one day?? Pre written? Mother Mary i wanna have your productivity /pos
    Secondly, not to be mean at all, none of this comment is supposed to be mean. Simply a suggestion; in chapter 4 you wrote “gottverdammt telegram”, now I know it can be hard to choose the right grammar to swear in when the noun doesn’t have a gender due to it being English.
    May I offer the suggestion to write “gottverdammtes” instead? It would fit better for the context since telegram is neutral in German and this would be the “correct” conjugation (gottverdammtes Telegram) :]
    Really no need to use this at all, I’m just thinking out loud, it just stuck out to me as a native speaker

    I’ll be back next chapter if you don’t mind me, thank you for making math class so much more bearable <33

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    1. Heyyy! First of all thank you so fricking much for reading all this and liking it and writing out such a thoughtful comment!!! I’m beyond happy >v<
      Secondly, to answer both:
      1. Yes it was pre-written (in a google doc)! I wanted to upload five chapters at once to show people that this was not just done on a whim and to show them what the story offers :))
      2. Please, you’re not being “mean” in anyway whatsoever!!! I’m not a native German speaker so I realllllly appreciate any corrections - I will definitely change it to “gottverdammtes telegram”!! Vielen Dank <33
      3. Please come back to the next chapter!! I’m happy to be providing some joy amidst your math class :DD (I, in fact, will be uploading it very soon today!)

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      1. I dont mind writing comments so I write one under any fanfiction I liked, I'll be damned if I ever participate in the silent reader crowd.
        How long did it take you to get to the [I think] 5000 words if I may ask? I feel slow af, been on it since the end of November
        Glad I could help with the grammar btw, if youre unsure you can always reply to this or comment on my ff with German grammar questions, idm.
        In case i notice something in the other chapters, you'll see me in your comment section :]

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        1. Totally support that 🙌🏻
          I don’t quite remember how long it took me, though I know that I finished a chapter each day, and depending on how long the chapter was spent around 2 - 4 or maybe even 5 hours on them. You’ll begin to see that the chapters are getting longer - and subsequently, my time spent on them as well :’) I relate with the slowness aspect so much - I wrote all of these years back, in 2022, when I was kinda stuck at home and had bursts of inspiration that I just wanted to get out. So far, I have this book written up until the 13th chapter, but I started having writer’s block by the end of 2022, couldn’t upload the 12th until 2023, and just got around to finishing 13th around the time I joined AO3. So yeah, as a fellow writer, I totally get it!! (Here’s to also thanking you for motivating me to continue writing haha <3)
          Alright, I shall see you around! Chap 6 is out also in case you missed it :D

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