Comment on Naruto: I Died, And Replaced Sakura?!

  1. Okay, in the previous chapter Gai and Lee make an appearance, BY NAME, and in this chapter Team 7 have no idea who they are.

    The errors like this are really distracting for me at least.

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    1. Genin

      Thanks for pointing this out. This is because 32 is the canon introduction of them and I had forgotten I pre-introduced them in chapter 31. When I started writing this, it was much rougher and I have been making edits whenever people like you point out errors that still exist so thank you.

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