Comment on man, maybe writing alternian titles actually is easier

1. Null24 on Chapter 2 Fri 12 Dec 2025 05:07PM UTC

   

   hi, just commenting here to say that i've re-read chapters 1 and 2 and i think the narration feels a lot better. know that your rewrites are appreciated and were not wasted :]

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2. 1. criticalexponent on Chapter 2 Sat 13 Dec 2025 03:26AM UTC

      

      omg thanks so much for rereading and commenting! legit freaking out that someone bothered to re-read it :')

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   2. 1. Null24 on Chapter 2 Sat 13 Dec 2025 09:45AM UTC

         

         well, you put in the effort so it's only fair to me that i should try to read what you write. besides, the narration is good, and this fic is a joy to read, i'd happily re-read it

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      2. 1. criticalexponent on Chapter 2 Sun 14 Dec 2025 11:15PM UTC

            

            im happy youre enjoying it!! thanks so much, this gives me good motivation

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