Comment on Naruto: I Died, And Replaced Sakura?!

1. Artoria99 on Chapter 23 Tue 02 Dec 2025 05:22AM UTC

   

   Im guessing you wanna remove the previous chapter where they go to wave? Otherwise they went there twice and were introduced to tazuna's family twice
   Also name dropping chidori and gai despite them being very personal to kakashi or straight up an A rank assassination jutsu is bad, i think

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2. 1. ditzykunoichi on Chapter 23 Tue 02 Dec 2025 07:54AM UTC

      

      Is the zabuza/tazuna stuff still duped? I thought I had fixed that awhile ago (it was when I first started writing this, I accidentally wrote the same chapter multiple times >_<)

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   2. 1. Artoria99 on Chapter 23 Tue 02 Dec 2025 10:56AM UTC

         

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   3. ditzykunoichi on Chapter 23 Tue 02 Dec 2025 08:08AM UTC

      

      I made a little adjustment to that scene based on what you said :)

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