Oh, of course
Im trying to see where the story leads, its just there are some inconsistencies that make me pause and take me out of the story
I try to point them out as i read
Cant wait to read the edited version
Hope you have fun writing the story too :)
its a big help honestly! especially because i was in an accident on halloween and got a bad concussion, so my short term memory has been pretty bad the past month- i make everything on my own so no friends to look it over or anything to make sure i didn't mess up consistency t_t so fr thanks!!
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