Comment on Naruto: I Died, And Replaced Sakura?!

  1. Oh, of course
    Im trying to see where the story leads, its just there are some inconsistencies that make me pause and take me out of the story
    I try to point them out as i read
    Cant wait to read the edited version
    Hope you have fun writing the story too :)

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    1. Genin

      its a big help honestly! especially because i was in an accident on halloween and got a bad concussion, so my short term memory has been pretty bad the past month- i make everything on my own so no friends to look it over or anything to make sure i didn't mess up consistency t_t so fr thanks!!

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      1. 👍:)

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